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Traitor's Face - Prologue by Loopy777, literature

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Traitor's Face - Prologue

Prologue - The Pact (Centuries Ago) The tip of the spear was pressed against the oily chitin of Koh's body, the Face Stealer sprawled across the floor of his fetid domain wearing the face of cat-deer, but the smile that was being turned up at Kuruk was anything but defeated. "Congratulations, Avatar. Slay me and rejoice in yet another victory for your Spirit’s glory." Kuruk wanted to, but more than Koh's death, he wanted to smack that smile off the creature's stolen face. He wanted to see pain in Koh's eyes, and hear his cries of anguish. He wanted Koh to regret every choice in his unnatural life, wanted Koh to regret ever daring to c

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The Avatar and the Fire Princess 1 by Loopy777, literature

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The Avatar and the Fire Princess 1

Part 1 - Playing With Fire Marriage was often compared to being chained, but when Aang first met the woman who would be his wife, he was already bound with iron. She was preceded by an army of servants. The door to his cell was thrown open with a piercing scrape and the crimson-robed attendants flowed into the dark room like a blood tide. None spoke to him, or so much as looked him in the eyes; they went about their work with sureness and efficiency. Two of the servants brought lanterns hanging from tree-like stands that brought heating light into Aang's dank universe. More brought rolls of carpet that were opened to cover the stone floor t

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Mai's Ramblings

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Mai's Ramblings - Kataang by Loopy777, literature

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Mai's Ramblings - Kataang

Mai on... Kataang. "Take the two most cavity-carving twits in the show, buckle them both in chastity belts, and you have the main 'ship' of Avatar: The Last Airbender. "Aang is an airbending freak with no hair and a body build like my little brother WHO'S TWO YEARS OLD, but he has a personality that could favorably be compared to an affectionate puppy so he naturally lights up Katara's radar like a firetruck with its siren set to 11. Katara was dark-skinned, exotic, as curved as a lamppost, and uninterested in getting some, so naturally the romance didn't progress much until season 3 when she suddenly discovered America and puberty set in.

Mai's Ramblings - Sukka by Loopy777, literature

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Mai's Ramblings - Sukka

Mai on... Sukka! "Sukka- the Avatar ship for people who like their men girly, their women desperate, and their heat level higher than Ozai on Cactus Juice. "Sokka has the unfortunate luck to combine the sexiest male body on the planet with a personality so girly even Ty Lee got jealous. Early in his adventures he meets a girl named Suki and falls head over heals for her, drawing yet another disturbing comparison to Ty Lee with both his agility and love for people in CLOWN makeup. Suki is the greatest warrior on the planet, and also the hottest girl on the planet IF YOU LIKE THAT SORT OF THING, and wiser than three Avatars in a barrel, so of

Mai's Ramblings - Ty Zula by Loopy777, literature

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Mai's Ramblings - Ty Zula

Mai on... Ty Zula. "No matter how hard, fast, and consistently Nickelodeon denies it, one of the canon ships that snuck past the censors was the illicit romance between Princess Azula and Ty Lee, the two fruitcakes I have the misfortune to call my best friends. "Azula had a rough childhood that consisted of being the Fire Lord's favorite person in the whole world and so got away with every single antic she perpetrated in service to her inborn misanthropy. She might give you a spiel about how she never had her mother's love and that it resulted in a lifetime of sociopathic rampaging, but the truth is that torturing her big brother Zuko with

Mai's Ramblings - Pakkana by Loopy777, literature

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Mai's Ramblings - Pakkana

Mai on... Pakkana! "Perhaps the second-most surprising official coupling of Avatar: The Last Airbender BEHIND MY OWN OVERLY COMPLICATED ROMANCE is the geriatric cuddle-fest between Pakku the Waterbending Master and Kana the former FemiNazi. "Kana was born in the Northern Watertribe where woman are prevented from learning any useful Waterbending aside from the rare and highly valued healing arts, and she was betrothed to Bender Prodigy and Man of the Year, Pakku. Kana never had any bending ability at all and judging from her INBRED SOCIALLY-CHALLENGED GRANDKIDS her family was hardly the sort that anyone would want to willingly marry into, bu

Mai's Ramblings - Kyakoda by Loopy777, literature

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Mai's Ramblings - Kyakoda

Mai on... Kyakoda! "Successful adult relationships are rare enough on Avatar: The Last Airbender but one that somehow managed to generate a minimal amount of suspense was the devastatingly tragic SNIFF SNIFF marriage between Hakoda of the Southern Water Tribe and Kya She of that Silly Little Necklace. "The necklace itself used to be Old Lady Kana's betrothal necklace that she got from Old Geezer Pakku and even though she ran a full 180 degrees of a world away from him she kept it as some kind of morbid family heirloom and it was eventually passed to Kya. I don't know if Kana was Kya's mother or Hakoda's mother but to be honest I have troubl

Mai's Ramblings - Moppa by Loopy777, literature

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Mai's Ramblings - Moppa

Mai on... Moppa! "When it comes to Avatar: The Last Airbender anything and everything is fodder for 'shipping' including animals and various manufactured transports. The most famous of the former is the completely imaginary romantic affair between the disgusting monster Air Bison Appa and the hyperactive annoying Lemur Momo, and as disgusting as it is to imagine these two pairing up it has still been deemed by the grand powers that be THANK YOU MIKE AND BRYAN to be more probable and tasteful than the even more imaginary 'Zutara' relationship which I disliked for COMPLETELY UNBIASED REASONS. "Appa is an Air Bison which looks like a mix betwe

Mai's Ramblings - Urzai by Loopy777, literature

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Mai's Ramblings - Urzai

Mai on... Urzai! "Easily the most absolutely dysfunctional ship in the entire Avatar series YES EVEN COUNTING ZUTARA is the tumultuous marriage between Phoenix Fire King Lord Ozai and Bad News Ursa. "Ozai was the younger son of Fire Lord Azulon who no one knows much about and we can't really judge him by his children because one was a tea-loving clown and the other was psychopath who lit babies on fire for jollies. He really wanted to be in charge because, you know, people who light babies on fire are just like that where that have to be in charge even though they'll just light the babies on fire regardless. "Ursa was an overly nice lady F

Mai's Ramblings - Chily by Loopy777, literature

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Mai's Ramblings - Chily

Mai on... Chily! "If I had to pick one couple in Avatar: The Last Airbender to stand as a shining antithesis of everything I value and live by, it would be the legally unrecognized pairing between the two NOT ENTIRELY SOBER hippies Chong and Lily. "Both are part of a group of traveling nomads NO NOT AIR NOMADS JUST HIPPIES whose sole purpose in life is to basically wander around the Earth Kingdom playing music that has no business being heard by human ears, but if it's heard by animals ears that may be even worse because believe it not there are some people out there who worry more about the suffering of turtleducks than humans AND MY BOYFR

Mai's Ramblings - Rozin by Loopy777, literature

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Mai's Ramblings - Rozin

Mai on... Rozin! "No one on Avatar is a stranger to romantic woes, but the failed relationship between Fire Lord Sozin and Avatar Roku is probably the one that hurt and disrupted the most number of other people. "Back about a hundred thousand years ago Roku and Sozin were bestest buddies who hung out together and practiced Firebending together and talked about girls together and celebrated birthdays together and ran around the Capital City together and I THINK WE CAN FIGURE OUT THE PATTERN ALREADY did everything together up to and perhaps including potty breaks EW GROSS. You'd think the Crown Prince would have more than one friend because e

Mai's Ramblings - Taang by Loopy777, literature

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Mai's Ramblings - Taang

Main on... Taang! "As common as it is on Avatar: The Last Airbender for relationships to form between wimpy men and tough awesome women, the idea is best showcased in the friendship MAYBE MORE between the Avatar Aang and Toph Bei Fong. "Being an Avatar meant that Aang had to learn all four elements as part of his training to become the world's great unwanted supercop but that wasn't as easy a proposition as it sounded. He already knew Airbending when he came out of his iceberg because for some reason the old Air Nomads thought that teaching all of their kids how to sneeze with AN INTENT TO MAIM would make life more interesting OH YEAH LOTS

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About Loopy777

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Aug 3, 1982
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Bah weep graaaaagnah weep ni ni bong!

(That's the universal greeting.)

Howdy, dA community! If you're a fan of "Avatar: The Last Airbender" or the Transformers franchise, you might recognize me as Loopy on Avatar Spirit or Jetfirespam on The Allspark. I'm also a fan of Star Wars, and many science fiction and fantasy stories that aren't as merchandise driven, such as Discworld.

I'm genetically incapable of producing visual art that doesn't make human eyes bleed, so this account features my pretty good fan fiction (if there even is such a thing), most notably Death of a Thousand Cuts, Retroactive, and Traitor's Face. I seem to alternate between dark-ish adventure and satirical comedy, so feel free to read according to your tastes.

Comments, especially the complimentary kind, please me very much, so I encourage all visitors to share their thoughts in a suitably adoring manner. Or not. I also really enjoy comments calling me a hack and wondering who ever told me I know how to write symbolism.

My stories are also posted to:

archiveofourown.org/users/Loop…

www.fanfiction.net/u/1723055/L…

Special thanks to Capt-BA for putting my tag together out of the Mai's Ramblings art, and Cerulean for the Traitor's Face art that is serving as my header graphic!

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Nov 1, 2019

Moratorium on Fanfic Updates

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I can't upload new chapters or stories until I figure out how to actually do it. I can't just upload my files anymore if they contain HTML tagging, and even when I Copy+Paste from another source that has already processed the formatting, this site seems to have given up on the idea of horizontal lines breaks. So until a fix is implemented, or I figure out how to bend this garbage site to my will, I can't post my writing. Go to https://www.fanfiction.net/~loopy777 or https://archiveofourown.org/users/Loopy instead. Sorry.

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Nov 1, 2019

Moratorium on Fanfic Updates

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Aug 2, 2016

atla.fans - A new Message Board for Me and You!

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To quote the founder: "ASN’s forum went down a couple of weeks ago and I started to have message board withdraws so I created one @ atla.fans  (Yes, I bought another domain (shut up!))  Loopy's helping me run the place. :) I’ve also created a companion tumblr @ atlafans.tumblr.com where I will post fan art, meta posts, fanfiction and other ATLA / Korra related tidbits.  My hope is to figure out a way to partially bridge the tumblr with the message board.  (Not sure it can be done, though.)" I'm a mod on this board, and I'm hoping to run some cool events. My first idea, waiting on a nice little member group to form, is to start a

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Antiyonder

Feb 22, 2023

Just thought I'd check to see if you had a deviantart account and well here I am.

I don't make any art myself, but I recently submitted pics of my DVDs, Comics and anything else I collect to compensate for my insecurities.😅

Loopy777

Feb 22, 2023

Nice! I'm barely here, though, ever since an update broke my ability to upload anything.

Thanks for the +fav

You're quite welcome!

CaseyJewels

Feb 2, 2020

Just finished reading Flowers for Mai on ASN (luckily last night I pulled it up in a separate tab, so I was able to read it today). I love the way you write Mai and Zuko, delving deep into who they are but in an almost poetic way. So much of the dialogue and actions are minimalist but convey so much. It's so much fun to see the show's universe through your eyes, and the ending made me smile.

Just thought I should let you know that somebody read it before it was gone.

Loopy777

Feb 3, 2020

Aw, thanks! It's on fanfiction.net and AO3 as well, but I haven't uploaded it here because I still have to figure out how to translate my horizontal line scene breaks.

And I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's probably the most emotionally healthy versions of Mai and Zuko that I've written yet, so I got to develop new 'acting' for them. One of the things I always try to do in my writing is bring interactions to life with more than just dialogue and thoughts, but it's a lot easier with 'big' stuff than little things like 'Flowers.' So it's great to hear that you found it effective.

CaseyJewels

Mar 28, 2020

Slow reply, but... I haven't been on fanfiction.net in years. I believe I just followed you on there though (the site has changed a bunch) and favorited the story there! One of these days I'll get around to my backlog of the rest of your stories. Especially as being temporarily laid off has given me extra time to try and tame my notifications on dA.

I understand formatting issues. I hope you get those worked out.

I've always enjoyed the little bits I've read of your writing. Hehe. I know you like to make the world/characters a lot more complex, but I didn't realize Zuko and Mai have such a rough time in your other stories. Yeah, it's really easy to get caught up in dialogue/thoughts, so I appreciate that you make an effort to dig deeper through actions--and especially with the small actions in this story.